Well, as pretty as I thought my first ad was, apparently it sucked in print. So they sent it back to me and I got a chance to redo it. There's a lesson in there somewhere about looking good on a computer screen and looking good on paper (and newspaper at that.)
It never really occurred to me to print it out and look at it that way before sending it in. It will next time.
So anyway, here's the revised ad. Apparently the logos were too small on the previous version, and didn't print well.